Details about the diffrent planet

Mark was on the planet Transall some of the plants are the red, rubber plants and the vines. The native tribes, are the Arrow people, the Tsook, the Rawhas, the nameless tribe that the Arrow people raided. Some of the animal species are the buffalo creatures, the howling things, the monkey-bears, the animals that some of the tribes ride on. The important people are Merko, Dagon, Megaan, Barow, Leeta, the shaman and Mark.

Responce to Jmack take 2

I think that it was accidental.

Responce to Jmack

I typed in how he got there but for some reason it didn't show so Mark got to the new planet via blue light.

Responce

I would have to say no I couldn't walk a cross the desert in one week because I'm just a 8th grade kid.

Chapter 2

Mark woke up, the air was thick and humid and smelled of coming rain it was daytime the sun was hidden by the clouds. Mark got up his head was pounding and felt as if it weighed a ton. He tried to remember the blue light there was the tube of blue light then the snake. Mark looked at his hands they were not swollen, he felt no pain, saw no bite marks, fingers worked fine, it looked as if nothing had happend, and what was weirder he was transported from the desert to the rainforest. Then he layed hand on the tall red grass. Grass? Red? He thought that he was delirious.
Mark thought he was having hallucinations. He heared a snorting sound that came from beyond the trees. Then all of a sudden a large hairy animal resembling a buffalo charged into the small clearing. It had long tusks, beady eyes and a pig like snout it waved it's shaggy head back and forth, sniffed the air and bellowed then charged Mark quickly ran and jumped up to a branch on the nearest tree the beast slammed in to the tree then the beast left soon after the beast left Mark climbed down the tree. He knew that a hallucination wouldn't attack him so this had to be a real place.

chapter 1

In the begening of the book it starts out with a guy named Mark, who is in the desert trying to get across it in one week, so that he can prove to his parents that he can live on his own. He is on his 4th day traveling through the desert at night, when all of a sudden there is a light in the sky it was blue, and the size of an grapefruit, and crashed he went to where it landed to investagate. When he got there the meteor was glowing, was round flat at the top, after he got up the meteor there was a hole, with the bright light coming out of it he put his hand in the hole he heard the rattlling to late he was biten by the snake.